Comments on: Arpan http://blog.ghushe.com/2009/04/22/arpan/ Even prophets don't have a sense of proportion Thu, 02 Sep 2010 16:49:52 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: nikhilesh.ghushe http://blog.ghushe.com/2009/04/22/arpan/#comment-70295 nikhilesh.ghushe Wed, 10 Jun 2009 19:11:31 +0000 http://blog.ghushe.com/2009/04/22/arpan/#comment-70295 @Saran 'cause it is about Bhakti Yoga :P @Saran

’cause it is about Bhakti Yoga :P

]]> By: Saranyan http://blog.ghushe.com/2009/04/22/arpan/#comment-70288 Saranyan Wed, 10 Jun 2009 15:19:54 +0000 http://blog.ghushe.com/2009/04/22/arpan/#comment-70288 Amazing - One is all, all is one. Why does it remind me so much of Bhakti yoga? ... -Saran Amazing – One is all, all is one.
Why does it remind me so much of Bhakti yoga? …

-Saran

]]> By: nikhilesh.ghushe http://blog.ghushe.com/2009/04/22/arpan/#comment-65754 nikhilesh.ghushe Mon, 27 Apr 2009 19:52:08 +0000 http://blog.ghushe.com/2009/04/22/arpan/#comment-65754 @Jeet Thanks @Parul :-) so you remember it. Isn't it surprising that we never got a chance to complete the Aham Brahmasmi conversation :-) @Shree All criticism is welcome. I accept the last stanza doesn't go well with the rest of the poem. But sometimes non-gelling things have to come together to complete each other :) But thanks for pointing it out, i might come up with a more gelling and yet complete ending. @Jeet Thanks

@Parul :-) so you remember it. Isn’t it surprising that we never got a chance to complete the Aham Brahmasmi conversation :-)

@Shree All criticism is welcome. I accept the last stanza doesn’t go well with the rest of the poem. But sometimes non-gelling things have to come together to complete each other :) But thanks for pointing it out, i might come up with a more gelling and yet complete ending.

]]> By: shree http://blog.ghushe.com/2009/04/22/arpan/#comment-65708 shree Sun, 26 Apr 2009 21:51:47 +0000 http://blog.ghushe.com/2009/04/22/arpan/#comment-65708 Hi, A very beutiful poem, you have a gift... If you don't mind critcism, I would suggest you change the last stanza, as it does not really go well with the theme of the rest of the poem... My thoughts, but you are the best judge of your poem... Hi,

A very beutiful poem, you have a gift…

If you don’t mind critcism, I would suggest you change the last stanza, as it does not really go well with the theme of the rest of the poem…
My thoughts, but you are the best judge of your poem…

]]> By: arvind http://blog.ghushe.com/2009/04/22/arpan/#comment-65537 arvind Thu, 23 Apr 2009 08:40:00 +0000 http://blog.ghushe.com/2009/04/22/arpan/#comment-65537 @Nikhilesh.Ghuse No, i am from NSIT actually, 2006 passout. @Nikhilesh.Ghuse
No, i am from NSIT actually, 2006 passout.

]]> By: Parul agrawal http://blog.ghushe.com/2009/04/22/arpan/#comment-65529 Parul agrawal Thu, 23 Apr 2009 07:15:40 +0000 http://blog.ghushe.com/2009/04/22/arpan/#comment-65529 hmm...nice piece.. so yet another thought that reminds me of the first thing i read about you on orkut...Aham brahmasmi... :) hmm…nice piece..

so yet another thought that reminds me of the first thing i read about you on orkut…Aham brahmasmi… :)

]]> By: Jeet http://blog.ghushe.com/2009/04/22/arpan/#comment-65513 Jeet Thu, 23 Apr 2009 04:29:55 +0000 http://blog.ghushe.com/2009/04/22/arpan/#comment-65513 Bahut umda Ghushe.. would love to see more gems from you. Bahut umda Ghushe.. would love to see more gems from you.

]]> By: nikhilesh.ghushe http://blog.ghushe.com/2009/04/22/arpan/#comment-65500 nikhilesh.ghushe Wed, 22 Apr 2009 20:50:47 +0000 http://blog.ghushe.com/2009/04/22/arpan/#comment-65500 @Rohini :-) @Saumya That one was acceptable... if you post any other para of that kafiyaa bandi... be ready for dire consequences... :D ... waise dhanyavad dhanyavaad!! :) @Ritesh dhanyavaad... abhi to shuruvaat hai dost!! Bhagya to abhi kulenge dost!! :) @Arvind Waah! Janaab aap DCE 2002 wale hi hain na? @Rohini :-)

@Saumya That one was acceptable… if you post any other para of that kafiyaa bandi… be ready for dire consequences… :D … waise dhanyavad dhanyavaad!! :)

@Ritesh dhanyavaad… abhi to shuruvaat hai dost!! Bhagya to abhi kulenge dost!! :)

@Arvind Waah! Janaab aap DCE 2002 wale hi hain na?

]]> By: arvind http://blog.ghushe.com/2009/04/22/arpan/#comment-65499 arvind Wed, 22 Apr 2009 20:18:27 +0000 http://blog.ghushe.com/2009/04/22/arpan/#comment-65499 Bahut achi hai! gutaakhi maaf kijiyega! (parantu raha nahin gaya) ab tak ki zindagi maine guzaari kabhi jaag ke kabhi need mein jab jaaga tujhe yaad kiya jab soya, tera swapn dekha Bahut achi hai!
gutaakhi maaf kijiyega! (parantu raha nahin gaya)

ab tak ki zindagi maine guzaari
kabhi jaag ke kabhi need mein
jab jaaga tujhe yaad kiya
jab soya, tera swapn dekha

]]> By: ritesh http://blog.ghushe.com/2009/04/22/arpan/#comment-65496 ritesh Wed, 22 Apr 2009 18:46:33 +0000 http://blog.ghushe.com/2009/04/22/arpan/#comment-65496 जीवन पथ पर सौ लोग मिले, कुछ साथ रहे, कुछ चले गए। घुशे को देखा हर साथी मे, और उनमे से सौ चले गए। तुम रह गये और भाग्य खुल गये । जीवन पथ पर सौ लोग मिले,
कुछ साथ रहे, कुछ चले गए।
घुशे को देखा हर साथी मे,
और उनमे से सौ चले गए।
तुम रह गये और भाग्य खुल गये ।

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